#EroticMusings 2026.01.04 — Week 32 (January 4-10) Setting: Do you make use of symbolism? For erotic and/or romantic purposes, or other reasons?
In a literary sense, symbolism is inputing additional or extraordinary meaning or emotion into an otherwise prosaic object, person, or event. I don't create symbols as a rule, but I recognize them when they appear. In one story, the MC fights off a man who tries to murder her and discovers that not only can she fight, that she likes fighting. "The Monster" becomes an important symbol thence forward of her internal struggle between principled aggression and evil, which she employs in stressful or unwontedly successful moments.
As for the second question, thinking it through made me realize that the current WIP does indeed use symbolism for romantic and erotic purposes. True to the way I write these things, the narrator (in 1st person POV) goes to great pains not to describe a particular "scientific" tool she is buying to share with her male friend (a 19-year-old university student and she's 30) as a dildo, but there should be no doubt in the reader's mind. A recent passionate scene demonstrates she's throughly enjoying the guy's ingenuity and initiative, but her gift to him to "measure her" might never be delivered and reappears in a few scenes. Her gift, wrapped in pink with a blue string, becomes a tragic symbol of the cruelty of the mob-controlled world in which the MC and her boyfriends are entangled, as well as a reminder that, to quote Dorothy, "Toto, I've A Feeling We're Not In Kansas Anymore."
Indubitably.
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#WritersCoffeeClub #WCC 2026.01.29 — Which phrase, paragraph, or page are you most proud of writing this month? CW: Mildly NSFW.
This page. A lot being unwrapped here and explaining it would take the entire earlier part of the book. I hope it isn't too confusing! Suffice it to say that it appears to be a magical world where day angels, like the POV, fly. The narrator is sharing some things the reader is barely familiar with as she buys a gift for a student boyfriend.
The clerk I'd spoken with had spotted me and fast walked to the counter to meet me, immediately ducking into the display case to find the passion tools I'd considered, the expensive ones since the cheap ones had sold.
"Which?" she asked, grinning.
I wanted to surprise Molt, who'd been a fun and informative companion, and I really wanted to see him smile. If I didn't spend my coin, eventually Boss Mead would claim it to keep me dependent. So… "The one with the—" Human stuck in my throat. "—remnant."
"You'll have to register it."
Which meant the civil ID I hadn't used since running from the constables and from home. I looked around. Students. Respectable professors. Nobody likely tied to the mob. "Can I give you the number? I don't have the card on me…" I said, patting my pockets for what I'd burnt a dozen years ago.
"Sure. I'll need to record your eye and primary feather color, and describe your idi—not that anyone checks, considering the sanctions the Bureau of Human Trafficking levies if it's fraudulent." She gave me a tilt-headed grin saying she didn't think I was stupid.
I was stupid. The number, were Boss Mead to get it, would allow him to trace former-me to my family. Him terrorizing them or using them against me would be catastrophic.
Unlikely. Not a zero chance, though.
I turned around and lifted my wings causing my primaries to brush the ceiling. It revealed my harnesses-and-leather-traces idioglyph. I flexed and flaunted the muscles below my wing joints because I could, and I was feeling good, powerful even—or telling myself I was—so why not? I knew from looking in a mirror that it made the black pigmented lines and circles wiggle.
"Guy move." The clerk snorted as she sketched it using a pen.
I blithely gave her the number with a return chuckle. I'd always been more comfortable with men, acting masculine, sometimes wondering why I'd not been born a man—until I rode one again and understood my privilege being born a woman.
The clerk wrapped the rectangular box in a swatch of appropriately dark pink satin, tying it with blue string she had to get from another department.
—From Reluctant Courier (for the Mob)
This earlier post is related, though only slightly more NSFW: https://eldritch.cafe/@sfwrtr/115981082493477428
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